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©2007-2009 ~Jazine
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I have been so busy so haven't updated in a while. School will soon be ending so i guess i will have more time. This is for my sister. She has been waiting for this picture since last year before KH2 came out in america. So that is one commision down. Now i have to get back to the other commisions. @_@ so much work....

comments encouraged. If you think something doesn't look right...color, anatomy, etc...i would like to know because that is the only way i will get better.

I might retouch roxas. He looks sort of messy.

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Very cute. I love the background and the eyes. Hmm I don't see any thing that doesn't look right about the anatomy, (most likly because I'm horrible at it) the only thing I see is her legs look a bit off to the side. Hardly noticeable.

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There's no such thing as original charcter designs anymore. You just have to try to be original with their personalities.
:iconbluewingnara:
Arggg I missed ya Jazine:heart: I thought that you were shot or something... It's nice to see your drawings again.
and for the Adv critique..... I think you should move Namine's eye (The right one) down a bit and try contrasting the colors a bit. I think it helps to flip you artwork around and see what catches your eyes. I do that often and it seems to help a bit.

btw, I love the picture overall and how the sky comes out of the tip of the pencil:-)
:iconjazine:
thank you for the comment.
:iconjazine:
thank you for the critique. I'll try to fix it up a bit. :hug:
:iconthesoulwithin:
The eyes are very pretty! the only thing I have to say is the colours are very light o.o

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I'm holding on to a piece of string, that string is the light which is my life.
I will never let go and it will never break, until it is time up for me.......
:iconjazine:
thank you. I understand. I am always so afraid to shade but i'll try harder next time.
:iconendless-paradox:
aww...so cute ^^
i really like the colours you used

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i love CLAMP

if you watch me and i don't watch you *poke* me

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